Debra’s Revenge
Yesterday,
Debra was late
for work. Her
boss was angry
and scolded her.
Her boss even
told her if
she did it again,
she would be fired.
When the boss
came to his office,
he told Debra
to cook a
delicious tea. Debra
was angry because
she probably was
fired. So she
put a purgative
powder in her
boss’s tea.
Then,
Debra took this
poison tea to
the boss’s
office. The boss
conceded to take
the tea to
drink. Debra acted like
the tea was
fine and took
the tea to
the boss happily.
Then, the boss
drank the tea.
He had enteritis
and had to go to
the toilet for diarrhea. Debra’s
revenge was very
successful, and she
laughed at her
boss finally.
Comment: This is a nicely written essay! I
love the creativity. You were able to make the story even more interesting
through your funny anecdotes. Also, I think you did a good job of structuring
the sentences and the essay as a whole. Good job!
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