My High School
Life
My
high school life
is not only
interesting, but also enriching[H1] . Everyday I
must get up
early in order
to get to
school on time. There
is a lot of homework, but teachers
teach us with
all their heart.
I am always busy doing
my homework and
rewiewing it. In
these three years,
I am sure
to get previous lot of knowledge.
My High School
Life
In
high school, I
did not study
hard. I usually
cut class. I
joined many extracurricular activities,
so I wasn’t able to concentrate
on my homework.
As I look
back, I should
not have wasted my precious
time. If it wasn’t for absent-mindedness in
that time, I could
have become an
excellent student.
Comment: Please refer to my comment on the top right
for a specific tip on using adjectives. Other than that, I don’t know if your
computer formatted this incorrect or whether you did it, but you shouldn’t have
two spaces between each word. I would delete one space between the words. Other
than that you only had a few grammar mistakes. Take care.
-Jared
[H1]When you are using an adjective to describe an object like “high
school life,” it will end in “ing.” If you are describing yourself, then use “ed.”
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