補充 2012-06-18 20:23 英文作文 爛到可以 指考非選擇題 哀 Fanny

 補充  2012-06-18 20:23   英文作文    爛到可以     指考非選擇題    哀  Fanny

                    Fanny

      My  name  is  Fanny.  I  am  thirty-two  years  old.  I  come  from  Tainan,  Taiwan.  I   can  speak  a  little  English,  Japanese,  and  fluent  Chinese.  I  am  short  and  a  little 

heavy.  My  hair  is  straight,  black  and  short.

       I  am  a  dependent  [E1] person.  Sometimes  I  am  a responsible   person.   I   am   a  soft  person[E2] ,  and  I   study  hard.

       My  casual  dress  is  long  pants,   red  glasses,  a T-shirt,  and  a long  sleeved shirt[E3] .  [E4] My  skin  has  a  lot  of   black   spots.   They  are   caused  by  sun.  My skin often burns in the sunlight .  so  [E5] I  must  wear  long  pants  and  long  sleeves  to  prevent  my skin  from  becoming  [E6] black.

       I  like  skating,   sking,   and   swimming.   And  I  like   go  on   the  Internet  to  play  games.  I   [E7] read  reference   books   every   afternoon   and   every  evening.

       I   aim  to   enter  [E8] the   university  in  Tainan,  which   has  good  teachers  and  good  equipment[E9] .  I   want  to    become   a   nutrient[E10]    doctor.   I  will  work  in  a hospital  in  Tainan,   or  keep  studying  nutrient   [E11] science[E12] .

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 [E1]I wonder if you mean ‘independent’? ‘Dependent’ means you depend on other people a lot.

 [E2]‘Person’ is for only one and ‘people’ is for more than one.

 [E3]I added this because I thought you mean a long-sleeved T-shirt, but I guess you mean a long-sleeved shirt over a T-shirt.

 [E4] This ‘because’ doesn’t connect to anything so I took it out.

 [E5]This connects to the previous sentence so we can put them together in one sentence.

 [E6]‘become’ is the verb and ‘became’ is the past tense. There is no such word as ‘becaming’.

 [E7]We don’t need ‘usually’ and ‘every’ together – one of them is enough.

 [E8]‘entrance’ is a noun. We need the verb ‘enter’ here.

 [E9]‘equip’ is a verb. We need the noun ‘equipment’ here.

 [E10]You could also say ‘nutritionist’.

 [E11]You could also say ‘nutrition science’.

 [E12]All in all this is a nice introduction with a clear structure. Your grammar is pretty good, but be careful about your spelling. Do you have a spell check on your computer? It can help you find spelling mistakes. Keep up the good work and good luck with your nutrition studies! :

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補充 2012-06-18 20:25 英文指考非選擇題部分 整句翻譯 爛到可以 哀 只會選擇題My High School Life

 補充   2012-06-18 20:25  英文指考非選擇題部分     整句翻譯     爛到可以    哀     只會選擇題My   High   School   Life

 

My   High   School   Life

My  high  school  life  is  not  only  interesting,  but  also   enriching[H1] .  Everyday  I  must  get  up  early  in  order  to  get   to  school  on  time.  There is a lot of homework,  but  teachers   teach  us  with  all  their  heart.  I  am always busy  doing  my  homework  and  rewiewing  it.  In  these  three  years,  I  am  sure  to  get  previous lot of  knowledge.

 

    

 

Comment: Please refer to my comment on the top right for a specific tip on using adjectives. Other than that, I don’t know if your computer formatted this incorrect or whether you did it, but you shouldn’t have two spaces between each word. I would delete one space between the words. Other than that you only had a few grammar mistakes. Take care.

 

-Jared

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 [H1]When you are using an adjective to describe an object like “high school life,” it will end in “ing.” If you are describing yourself, then use “ed.”

補充 2012-06-18 20:26 英文指考非選擇題整句翻譯部分 爛到可以 哀 The Last Year in High School

 補充  2012-06-18 20:26   英文指考非選擇題整句翻譯部分    爛到可以   哀    The  Last  Year  in  High  School

 The  Last[E1]   Year  in  High  School

     The  last  year  in  high  school,  my  main  concern  was  [E2] how  to  pass  the upcoming  college  examination[E3] .  Everyday   I  went  to  bed  and  got  up  as early  as  [E4] possible.  I  took[E5]    regular  exercise  to  keep  my body  healthy.  Most  of the time  I  concentrated  on  my  homework,  so  I  have  interest  in  pursuing[E6]   knowledge.  I  find  out  that  the  more  books  I  read,  the  more  I  am  mentally [E7] enriched.  In  that  year,   my life was [E8]   pains-taking  and   full  of  hope  .

 

 

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 [E1]‘Last’ is already the superlative form. You don’t need to add ‘est’.

 [E2]This is past tense so I think that you have already finished school.

 [E3]‘examine’ is the verb. We need the noun here – examination.

 [E4]Here you can say ‘as early as possible’ or you can say ‘as early as I could’.

 [E5]For some reason Taiwanese teachers always teach students to say ‘take exercise’, but no one where I’m from says that. We usually say ‘got some exercise’.

 [E6]‘pursuit’ is a noun and ‘pursue’ is a verb. Don’t mix them together.

 [E7]Here you can use the adverb ‘mentally’ to get your point across more smoothly.

 [E8]It’s not clear if you are finished with this year yet or not. I guess this time has already passed so we should use past tense.

補充 2013-04-06 13:09 爛英文My High School Life

 補充  2013-04-06 13:09   爛英文My   High   School   Life

My   High   School   Life

     In  high  school,  I  did  not  study  hard.  I  usually  cut  class.  I  joined  many  extracurricular  activities,  so  I  wasn’t able to  concentrate  on  my  homework.  As  I  look  back,  I  should  not have wasted  my  precious  time.  If it wasn’t  for absent-mindedness  in  that  time,  I  could have  become  an  excellent  student.

 

Comment: Please refer to my comment on the top right for a specific tip on using adjectives. Other than that, I don’t know if your computer formatted this incorrect or whether you did it, but you shouldn’t have two spaces between each word. I would delete one space between the words. Other than that you only had a few grammar mistakes. Take care

 

 

 

-Jared

補充 2013-04-06 13:13 爛英文My Home Is Far From the School

 補充  2013-04-06 13:13   爛英文My  Home  Is  Far  From  the  School

My  Home  Is  Far  From  the  School

 

     My  home  is  far  from  the  school,  so if I want to be[E9]   in  time  for  school ,  I  must  get  up  early.  We  have  four  classes  in  the  morning  and  after  lunch  we  have  forty 

minutes  for  a  short  nap.  I  concentrate  [E10] in  class  and  am  busy  [E11] taking  notes  in  order  to  review  after  class.  The  school  ends  at  four-thirty,  but  I  stay  at school  to  readbooks  and  do  not  go  straight  home.  In  order  to  pass   the  college  examination,  I  go  to  a  cram  school.  When  I  come  home,   I  am  exhausted[E12] .

 

 

 [E9]You could also say ‘because I am always on time for school’

 [E10]Usually we say ‘concentrate on something’ – ‘I concentrate on the teacher’. But because you can also use this verb without an object and then you don’t need the ‘on’.

 [E11]Because you have the ‘ing’ on ‘taking’ you don’t need the ‘to’ here.

 [E12]Wow! What a busy and tiring life! Keep up the great effort to achieve your dreams. You’ve done a good job with these two essays and your meaning is clear and easy to understand. The best advice I can give you is to pay attention to the form of the words you use. Notice when a word is a noun, a verb or an adverb or adjective. If you can remember all the forms of these words, it will become much easier for you to write smoothly

 

補充 2013-08-03 15:07 A Difficult Birth

 補充  2013-08-03 15:07   A    Difficult    Birth

A    Difficult    Birth

Sandra    was   pregnant   for   nine   months   and   was   due   to   give   birth   yesterday.   Her   husband,   Steven,   was   really   excited   and   they   were   both   very   happy.   When   Sandra   started   to   go   into   labor,   crying   and   screaming   with    pain,  Steven   took   her   to   the   hospital.  He   even   had   a   video   camera  to   record   the   wonderful   occasion.  The   doctor   quickly   concentrated   on   Sandra   and   her   baby,   while   Steven   stood   by.

Then    Sandra   began   to   bleed   a   lot  and   the   doctor   had   to     pull   the   baby   out   of   her   body   by   hand.   Seeing   the   bloodied   baby   arrive   caused   Steven   to   faint.   He   was   placed   in   a   hospital   bed    to   receive   an   injection   that   would   revive   him.    Sandra   was   not   happy   with   her   husband   at   all,   muttering   and   complaining   about   how   weak   he   was.   

But   as   she   took   her   baby   boy   into   her   arms,   she   had   to   laugh  - she   would   have   two   babies   and   not   one   to   look   after   if   Steven   did   not   recover   soon!

 

 

General Comments:

·         Spacing between words and lines is very large. This needs to be adjusted unless it is your style.

·         The story is a little gory, so I have toned it down a bit!

·         If you mean to say that she was 6 months pregnant and that the baby came early, you must say so. Otherwise it should be 9 months as I have put.

·         I have changed today to yesterday to be clearer to the reader that it is a past tense story.

·         There are several spelling mistakes – always check after writing.

·         The word incantation is used incorrectly here. It is a religious word.

·         There does not seem to be a very strong point or conclusion to this story. I think it could have been less detailed about the actual birth, and made funnier about Steven’s reaction. I have added a conclusion to help you that I think fits well. Delete it of course if you dislike it, or have a word limit.

·         Instead of short sentences, try and join them as I have done to make your writing less ‘choppy.’

·         You just need to spend more time rereading and rechecking your writing, and then fewer mistakes will be made.

補充 2013-08-03 15:09 A Terrible Walk Home

 補充  2013-08-03 15:09     A    Terrible    Walk    Home  

A    Terrible    Walk    Home

Betty   and   Simon   were   very   close   classmates   who  kept   no   secrets   from   one   another.  

Yesterday   they   talked   to   each   other   happily   as   usual   after   class.   They   put   their   school   bags   by   their   sides   where   they   swung   freely   and   easily.   Then,   suddenly   Betty   walked   into   a   large,   heavy   rock.   She   was   very   sore   and   yelled   out   to   Simon.   Simon   heard   her   and   worried   about    her   safety,   so   he   immediately   looked   over   and   his   eyes  widened.  

By   then,   Betty   had   by   then   fallen   down   the   road.  She   was   fine,   but   her   ridiculous   panties,   which    had   a   big   red   heart   in   the   center,  were   seen   by   Simon.   He   just   could   not   help   laughing   at   her.    Betty   was   so   angry   when   she    stood   up.   She   picked    up     a   small   stone   and   threw   it   at   Simon’s   head.  Ouch!   Simon’s   head   hurt   a   lot.   They   definitely   were   no   longer   close   friends   after   that   incident!

 

 

General Comments:

·         Be aware of when you can join two short sentences into one – see first sentence for example.

·         In a short piece of writing such as this, try not to repeat words or phrases e.g. ‘each other’, ‘sore’.

·         The spacing between words and lines is quite large. It would be better to reduce word spacing, unless it is a style you like.

·         Please try to not use contractions, such as ‘can’t’, unless someone is speaking.

·         ‘….stretched his eyes’ doesn’t make sense, but have written what I think you mean.

·         Always check your spelling after writing – there are a few mistakes.

·         ‘Knicker’ is an incorrect word here. You need ‘panties’for American English or ‘knickers’ in British English.

·         Overall it is mostly understandable – a very embarrassing walk home I would say!

補充 2013-08-06 14:42 Debra’s Revenge 畫顏色是老師批改過的地方

 補充  2013-08-06 14:42   Debra’s   Revenge     畫顏色是老師批改過的地方    

Debra’s   Revenge

Yesterday,   Debra   was   late   for   work.   Her   boss   was  angry   and   scolded   her.    Her   boss   even   told   her   if   she   did  it again,   she   would be   fired.   When   the   boss   came   to   his   office,    he    told   Debra    to    cook   a   delicious   tea.   Debra   was   angry   because   she   probably   was   fired.   So   she   put   a   purgative   powder   in   her   boss’s   tea.

Then,   Debra   took   this   poison   tea   to   the   boss’s   office.   The   boss   conceded   to   take   the   tea   to   drink.   Debra   acted like   the   tea   was   fine   and   took   the   tea   to   the   boss   happily.   Then,   the   boss   drank   the   tea.   He   had   enteritis   and had to   go   to   the  toilet   for   diarrhea.   Debra’s   revenge   was   very   successful,   and   she   laughed   at   her   boss   finally.

 

Comment: This is a nicely written essay! I love the creativity. You were able to make the story even more interesting through your funny anecdotes. Also, I think you did a good job of structuring the sentences and the essay as a whole. Good job!

 

補充 2013-08-06 14:44 An Embarrassing Bus Ride

 補充  2013-08-06 14:44   An   Embarrassing   Bus   Ride

An   Embarrassing   Bus   Ride

One   day,   Steven   took   a   bus   as   usual.   Then,   an   old   woman   took   the   bus   while   he   sat   in his  soft seat.  The   old   woman   took   a   cane     and   walked   exhaustedly.   Steven    sometimes   took   the   priority   seat.   It   was   Steven’s   bad   habit.   Then,   he   listened   to   music   with   his ear-phones   and   was   happy.

After   that,   the   old   woman   didn’t   find   any   seat   to   sit.   She   was   angry   and   told   Steven   to yield   to her.   Steven   was   sorry   and   embarrassed   for   his   fault,   so   he   stood   up   to   yield to  her.   But   the   old   woman   was   still   angry   because   Steven   wore   his   ear-phones  and   didn’t   seriously   listen   to   her   complain.   Then,   Steven   hurried   up   to   take out the   ear-phones   and   looked   over.   Steven  didn’t   have   anything else   to   do   but   freeze.

 

Comment: I think is a good writing. Yu didn’t make many mistakes and the story flowed well. I would encourage you to be more creative though. Don’t be afraid to give the story some funny, interesting parts, even if it isn’t realistic. Have fun with it!

補充 2013-08-06 20:52 An Embarrassing Bus Ride

補充  2013-08-06 20:52   An   Embarrassing   Bus   Ride

 

An   Embarrassing   Bus   Ride

One   day   Steven   took   a   bus   as   usual.   Then   an   old   woman   took   a   bus   when   he   sat   with  soft.  The   old   woman   took   a   cane     and   walked   exhaustedly.   Steven    sometimes   took   the   priority   seat.   It   was   Steven’s   bad   habit.   Then   he   listened   to   the   music   with   ear-phone   and   was   happy.

After   that   the   old   woman   didn’t   find   any   seat   to   sit.   She   was   angry   and   told   Steven   yield   her.   Steven   was   sorry   and   embarrassing   on   his   fault,   so   he   stood   up   to   yield   her.   But   the   old   woman   was   still   angry   because   Steven   wore   a   ear-phone  and   didn’t   seriously   listen   to   her   complain.   Then   Steven   hurried   up   to   took   away   the   ear-phone   and   looked   over.   Steven  didn’t   have   another   ways   to   do   except   freezing.

補充 2013-08-06 20:53 Debra’s Revenge

 補充  2013-08-06 20:53   Debra’s   Revenge

Debra’s   Revenge

Yesterday   Debra   was   late   to   work.   Her   boss   was  angry   to   scold   her.    Her   boss   even   told   her   if   she   did   again,   she   was   fire.   When   the   boss   came   to   his   office,    he    told   Debra    to    cook   a   delicious   tea.   Debra   was   angry   because   she   probably   was   fire.   So   she   put   a   purgative   powder   in   her   boss’s   tea.

Then   Debra   took   this   poison   tea   to   the   boss’s   office.   The   boss   conceited   to   take   the   tea   to   drink.   Debra   faked   the   tea   was   fine   and   took   the   tea   to   the   boss   happily.   Then   the   boss   drank   the   tea.   He   had   a   enteritis   to   go   to   the  toilet   for   diarrnoea.   Debra’s   revenge   was   very   successful,   and   she   laughted   at   her   boss   finally.

補充 2013-08-07 12:31 A Terrible Walk Home

 補充  2013-08-07 12:31   A    Terrible    Walk    Home

A    Terrible    Walk    Home

Betty   and   Simon   were   very   close   classmates.   They  kept   no   serects   from   each   other.   Yesterday   they   talked   to   each   other   happily  again   after   class.   They   put   their   school   bags   by   side   freely   and   easy.   Then   Betty   hit   a   big   and   heavy   rock.   She   was   very   sore    and   yelled   out.   Simon   worried   about   Brtty’s   safety,   so   he   stretched   his   eyes.

Then   Betty   fell   down   the   road,   but   she   was   fine.   Her   ridiculous   knicker  which   was   in   the   center   having  a   big   red   heart   was   seen   by   Simon.   Simon   can’t   help   laughting   at   her.   Then   Betty   was   angry   and    stood   up.   She   cast    a   small   rock   to   Simon’s   head.   Simon   was   very   sore.   They   weren’t   already   close   friends   after   yesterday.

補充 2013-08-07 12:32 An Accident

 補充   2013-08-07 12:32  An    Accident

An    Accident

One   day   Gary   walked   at   home.    Gary   ast   his   drink   tin   with   having   his   own   way   after   drinking   up   his   drink.   Then   the   can   hit   Simon’s   head.   Simon   was   very   sore   and   yelled   out.   Then  Simon  disputed   with   Gary   about   Gary’s   bad   behavior.   They   fighted   with   their   hands.   The   battle   was   keen.

Then   they   remissed   and   fighted   in   the   staircase.   Gary   was   not   firm   in   centre   of   gravity,   and   he   fell   down   the   stairs.   Simon   was   afraid  of  Gary’s   safety    because   Gary   should   die..   Simon   stretch     his   eyes   and   wanted   to   hold   Gary’s   hands.    But   Gary   didn’t   hold   Simon’s   hands.   Gary   fell   down   from   the   tenth  staircase   to   the   first   staircase.   Gray   hurted   very   much,   and   Simon   took   him   to   the   hospital.   Because   Simon’s   looking   after   Gary,     Gary   got   better   faster.   Gary   thanked   Simon’s   warm   and   sincere,   and    made   close   friend   with   Simon.

補充 2013-08-07 12:33 Don’s Ugly Briefcase

補充  2013-08-07 12:33   Don’s   Ugly    Briefcase

 

Don’s   Ugly    Briefcase

Yesterday    when   Don   got   up,   it   was   8:50AM.   He   was   late   to   work.   So   he   was   in   a   hurry,    took   his   toast   from   the   toaster,    and   put   on   his   clothes   fast.    Then   he   heard   the   trash  track   music.    He   took   his   bag   filling   with   trash,   and   took   his   ugly   briefcase   faster.   Then   he   opened   the   door   and   prepared   to   work.  

When    he   came   near   the   trash   track,   he   wanted   to   cast   his   trash   bag   to   the   trash   track.   But   he   mistook   his   ugly   and   old   briefcase   was   the   trash   track.   When   the   trash   track   went   far   away,   he   found   his   fault.   He   was   shocked,    took   his   trash,   and   didn’t   have   anything   to   do   with   his   work   briefcase,   his    toast   in   the   bruefcase,   and   his   home   key..

補充 2013-08-07 12:33 Christmas Eve Dinner

 補充   2013-08-07 12:33   Christmas   Eve   Dinner

Christmas   Eve   Dinner

Jene  bought   the   Christmas  Eve   dinner   yeaterday.   She  happily  bought   some   milk,    fruit,    vegetable,    salt,    pepper,   sugar,   wheat   flour  powder,   bread,     toast,    and    two   big   toasted   turkey   in   the   supermarket.    Then   she   cashed   all   the   food   in   the   counter.   The   saler   was   very   friendly.   But   the   food   was   too   heavy   for   Jene   to   take.

In   halfway,   Jene’s   bag   were   broken,   and   the   food   fell   down   the   road.   But   Jene   didn’t   know   anything   about   the   broken   bag.  She   just   felt   slighter   and   slighter.   The   black   cat   found   the   delicious   food,   so   the   cat   stop   to   eat   them.   When   Jene   came   home,   she   finally   found   the   fault.   But   it   was   vain.   She   just   was   sad   and   didn’t   have    anything   to   do    with   the   Christmas   Eve   poor   dinner.

補充 2013-08-07 12:34 Joe’s Glasses

 補充  2013-08-07 12:34   Joe’s   Glasses

Joe’s   Glasses

Joe   had   a   serious   sight   problem.  That   was   short-sightedness.   So   he   couldn’t  see   anything   without   his   glasses.   One   day   he   walked   on   the   street   and   took   his   ease.   He   stepped   a   banana   peel,   so   he   fell   down   seriously.   He   yelled   out   and   frightened   a   lot.

Then   he   stood   up   firmly.   But   he   found   his   previous  glasses   was   broken.   The   glasses   never   worked   again.   Joe   can’t    do   anything  but   to   repair   his   glasses   in   glasses  store.  The   store  owner   told   him   the   glasses   were   repaired   for   a   long   time.  The   other   day    he   had   a   examination.   Because   of   his   short-sightedness   problem,    he   must   put   on   his   glasses.   So   he   put   on   his   hydroscope   to   take   the   text.   Everyone   was   shocked   his   odd   behavior.

補充 2013-08-07 12:34 The Big Flood

 補充   2013-08-07 12:34   The    Big    Flood

The    Big    Flood

One   day   two   ants   saw   a   big   red   thing   near   their   nest. The   two   ants   relied   on   the   big   tree   to   flee   away   their   fearing     diaster.    Then    the   red   thing   floored   a   lot   of   rain.  They   must   ran   up   the   rock   to   flee   away   their   diaster.   They   were   cold   and   very   afraid   they   would   die.

Then    the    water   was   full   of   all   their   earth,   rock,   and   tree   roots.   They   didn’t   have   anything   to   stand   up,   so   they   fell   down   the   flood.   They   strggled   to   swim,   but   they   still   probably   drowned.   It   turned   out   to   be   someone   watered   his   small   potted   plant.   The   two   small   ants   were   too   small   to   avoid   the    big   flood,    which   big   people   just   felt   it   was   the   little   water.

補充 2013-08-07 12:34 John and the Bully

 補充  2013-08-07 12:34   John    and   the   Bully

John    and   the   Bully

When   Jonn   was   a   junior   high   school    student,    he    was   very   short.    He   was   just   145cm   height   while   others   were   165cm    height.    John    liked    Sandra    very    much.    John   took    his   love  letter    to   her.    But   school     bullies   usually    took    John’s   love   letter   to   laught   at.    John    asked   the   bully   returning   his    letter,    but   it   was   usually   in   vain.   Because   John   was   very   weak,    and   he   didn’t   fight   with    the   bullies.

Then   he   made   up   a   decision   which   he   must   be   tall   and   strong.   He   took   exercise,   and   he   drank    a    lot   of   milk   every   day.   When   John   was   a   senior   high   school   student,   he  was   tall   and   strong.   He   was   180cm   height.   And   he   was   the   best   pentathlete   in   his   school.   Now   he   can   freely   sent   his   love   letter   to   Sandra.   So   far   he   and   Sandra   were   a   couple   of   lovers   in   his   school.

補充 2013-08-07 12:35 The Birthday Party Surprise

 補充  2013-08-07 12:35   The    Birthday   Party   Surprise

The    Birthday   Party   Surprise

Wendy  told   every  invited  classmates   not  to  wear   the   same   clothes   on   her   birthday   party   yesterday   morning.  Wendy   hope   this   party   was   diffrent   from   any   others.  Tom   was   her   invited   classmate.   Tom   has   some   freckles,   and   he   bought   a   cute   bear   face   pattern  suit   to   wear   in   Wendy’s   birthday.   Andy   was   her   invited   fat  classmate,   too.  He   bought   the   same   pattern  suit,   too.  Tom   and   Andy   both   wanted   to   a   focus   in   Wendy’s   birthday,   but   they  didn’t   know   their   clothes  are   the   same.

At   12:00  AM,   Tom   first  congrulationed  on  Wendy  “Happy   Birthday!”  And   Andy   ran   with   sweat  to  congrulation,   too.   Tom   and   Andy  found  their  clothes  are  the   same .  They   are   very   embarrassed.   Wendy,   Tom,   and  Andy   were   too   surprised   to   say   anything.

補充 2013-08-07 12:35 The Greedy Dog

 補充   2013-08-07 12:35   The    Greedy   Dog

The    Greedy   Dog

One   day    the   dog,   Spot,    took    his    meat    running    on    the    grassland  happily.   Then    he    found   a   river   and   walked   along   the   river.   Then   he   saw   a      dog    which   was   bitting   a   meat   in   the   river,    but   he   didn’t   know   that’s   a   reflected   image   of   the   water.

He   thought   the   meat   of   the   water    was    bigger   than   his.   So   he    put   his   meat   and   chased   the   meat   of   the   water.   Then   the   meat    in    his    mouth   sank   in   the   river,     and    the   meat   of    the   water   was   gone.   He   was    shocked.   Then    the   dog   of   the   water   didn’t   have   meat   on   his   mouth.    He   didn’t   know   why   the   meat   of    the   water    was   gone.    Finally   Spot   cried   and   wept   with   sadness.

補充 2013-08-07 12:36 The Ugly Duckling

 補充  2013-08-07 12:36   The    Ugly   Duckling

The    Ugly   Duckling

One   day   a   black   duckling   was   born.   His   white   sisters   and   brothers   were   strange   that   he   was   different   from   them.   Because   of   his   ugly   looking,   he   was   forced   by   bulling.   The   duclkling   didn’t   have   any   friend.  He   was   lonely   and   unhappy.

Then   the   snow   came,    and   the   winter  also   came.   His   mother   didn’t   take   care   of   him.   She   just   cared   about   her   normal   ducklings.  So   he   himself   slept   in   the   cold   rock   all   the   winter.   After   the   winter   was   gone,   the   ugly   duckling   was   grown    up.   It   turned   out   to   be   that   he   was   a   white   swan.   Now   he   was   the   beautiful   bird   in   the   lake.   All   his   duckling   brothers   and   sisters    which   were   grown   up   in   black   looking   anvied   his   beauty.