補充 2012-06-18 20:26 英文指考非選擇題整句翻譯部分 爛到可以 哀 The Last Year in High School

The Last[E1] Year in High School
The last year in high school, my main concern was [E2] how to pass the upcoming college examination[E3] . Everyday I went to bed and got up as early as [E4] possible. I took[E5] regular exercise to keep my body healthy. Most of the time I concentrated on my homework, so I have interest in pursuing[E6] knowledge. I find out that the more books I read, the more I am mentally [E7] enriched. In that year, my life was [E8] pains-taking and full of hope .
[E1]‘Last’ is already the superlative form. You don’t need to add ‘est’.
[E2]This is past tense so I think that you have already finished school.
[E3]‘examine’ is the verb. We need the noun here – examination.
[E4]Here you can say ‘as early as possible’ or you can say ‘as early as I could’.
[E5]For some reason Taiwanese teachers always teach students to say ‘take exercise’, but no one where I’m from says that. We usually say ‘got some exercise’.
[E6]‘pursuit’ is a noun and ‘pursue’ is a verb. Don’t mix them together.
[E7]Here you can use the adverb ‘mentally’ to get your point across more smoothly.
[E8]It’s not clear if you are finished with this year yet or not. I guess this time has already passed so we should use past tense.
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