補充 2013-04-06 13:09 爛英文My High School Life
My High School Life
In high school, I did not study hard. I usually cut class. I joined many extracurricular activities, so I wasn’t able to concentrate on my homework. As I look back, I should not have wasted my precious time. If it wasn’t for absent-mindedness in that time, I could have become an excellent student.
Comment: Please refer to my comment on the top right for a specific tip on using adjectives. Other than that, I don’t know if your computer formatted this incorrect or whether you did it, but you shouldn’t have two spaces between each word. I would delete one space between the words. Other than that you only had a few grammar mistakes. Take care
-Jared
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